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کتاب استارتر, صفحه 85, تمرین 4, بخش C و D

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نقل قول شده از: سپیده شجاعی

با سلام تكليف صفحه ٨٥كتاب استارتر

What did you do yesterday 

 

Yesterday was a normal day for me.

Ferst, I got up at 9:30. I usually get up 9:00or 9:30.

Next, I brushed my teeth and had breakfast.

 I cleaned my house then, I went to the shop for bought something for dinner.

After that, I went to the gym with my friend at 5:00.

Next, I went home.

Finally I had dinner after that, I took a shower and went to bed at 10:00


سلام عزیزم,
جمله اول تون کاملا درسته. جمله دوم First رو این طوری مینویسن. دیکته اش رو اشتباه نوشتید. و در همین جمله دوم قبل از 9 و 9:30 حرف اضافه at رو بذارید لطفا.
جمله سوم تون هم کاملا درسته. جمله چهارم تون یه ایرادی دارید که مربوط به کتاب استارتر نمیشه. نوشتید for bought این اشتباهه. وقتی میخواید for رو به علاوه یه فعلی کنید باید به علاوه پایه اون فعل کنید نباید اون فعل گذشته باشه. باید مینوشتید for buying. جملات پنجم و ششم و هفتم تون هم کاملا درست هستن. 
خیلی عالیه. فکر میکنم دقت تون رو خیلی زیاد کردید چون نسبت به تکلیف قبلی اشتباه های بسیار بسیار کمتری دارید. yes


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سپیده شجاعی

با سلام تكليف صفحه ٨٥كتاب استارتر

What did you do yesterday 

 

Yesterday was a normal day for me.

Ferst, I got up at 9:30. I usually get up 9:00or 9:30.

Next, I brushed my teeth and had breakfast.

 I cleaned my house then, I went to the shop for bought something for dinner.

After that, I went to the gym with my friend at 5:00.

Next, I went home.

Finally I had dinner after that, I took a shower and went to bed at 10:00


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نقل قول شده از: محسن زیارتی

Page:85, writing, A blogpos, starter book

Yesterday was good for me. It was a day that I must to defend my thesis in university.

First, I got up at 8:00. I was very excited! Next, I took a shower. Then I had breakfast. I was very stressed. After that, I went to my university by my car. My supervisor greeted me and said don't be stress. My friend helped me to prepare for defense meeting. Thesis committee members were sat on their chairs and looked at me. I started and finished on time. Finally, I went home. I was really tired. I ate dinner and went to bed at 9:00.

 

 

 

 


سلام عزیزم,

ممنون بابت ارسال تکالیف.
در خط اول نوشتید: It was a day that I must to defend my thesis in cxuniversity. برای گذشته must رو به این صورت به کار نمی بریم بلکه به had to تبدیلش می کنیم. و همچنین چون درباره روز مشخصی صحبت میکنید (دیروز) و دانشگاه مشخص (دانشگاه محل تحصیل تون) که باید تزتون رو دفاع می کردید, برای روز و دانشگاه در اینجا از حرف تعریف مشخص the استفاده کنید. باید مینوشتید: It was the day that I had to defend my thesis in the university.

در جمله: I went to my university by my car انگلیسی ترش این بود که بنویسید: I drove to the University یا I drove my car to the University.

در این جمله: My supervisor greeted me and said don't be stress که دارید عینا حرف کسی (در این جا supervisor) خودتون رو نقل میکنید, چون حرفش رو عینا همون طور که گفته بیان کردید باید جمله اش رو بذارید توی گیومه و همچنین میخواسته بهتون بگه "استرس نداشته باش" پس باید از صفت stressed استفاده می کردید. پس بنویسید:
My supervisor greeted me and said: "Don't be stressed."O

در این جمله: My friend helped me to prepare for defense meeting چون مشخصه که دارید درباره کدوم جلسه دفاع (جلسه دفاع خودتون که اول صحبتش رو کردید) صحبت می کنید, باید حرف تعریف مشخص the رو به کار ببرید و بنویسید: My friend helped me to prepare for the defense meeting

جمله بعدی تون این بوده: Thesis committee members were sat on their chairs and looked at me باز هم چون مشخصه منظورتون کدوم کمیته تز هست (کمیته تزی که در جلسه دفاع شما حاضر بودن) پس باید از حرف تعریف مشخص the استفاده کنید و همچنین  و برای اینکه بگید در اون لحظه اون ها نشسته بودند و داشتند نگاه میکردند باید گذشته استمراری به کار ببرید و بنویسید:
The Thesis committee members were sitting on their chairs and looking at me
اما اگه منظورتون اینه که نشسته بودن و نگاه کردن, جمله تون درسته.
در کل خیلی عالی بود. اشتباه های شما هم بیشتر مربوط به کاربرد حرف تعریف مشخص میشد که زمان میبره تا تسلط پیدا کنید. آفرین.smileyyes

And by the way congrats on thatsmileyheart

 

 


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محسن زیارتی

Page:85, writing, A blogpos, starter book

Yesterday was good for me. It was a day that I must to defend my thesis in university.

First, I got up at 8:00. I was very excited! Next, I took a shower. Then I had breakfast. I was very stressed. After that, I went to my university by my car. My supervisor greeted me and said don't be stress. My friend helped me to prepare for defense meeting. Thesis committee members were sat on their chairs and looked at me. I started and finished on time. Finally, I went home. I was really tired. I ate dinner and went to bed at 9:00.

 


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محمد مهدی حجاری

سلام استاد بخش رایتینگ ص 85 کتاب استارتر نوشتن یک بلاگ درباره اینکه دیروز چه کردید 

Yesterday was a typical day for me.

First, I got up at 5:30 and had  breakfast. I had  bread, butter, honey and tea for breakfast.

Next, I read  news  for 15  minute and I was wearing my clothes to go to school .

After school I went to home for lunch, break and did homework.  

Then, I played with computer , learned english and listened to music. 

Finally, I had dinner with mom and I went to my bedroom for hearty sleep  


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آزاده مبشر
نقل قول شده از: محمد مهدی حجاری

سلام استاد بخش رایتینگ ص 85 کتاب استارتر نوشتن یک بلاگ درباره اینکه دیروز چه کردید 

Yesterday was a typical day for me.

First, I got up at 5:30 and had  breakfast. I had  bread, butter, honey and tea for breakfast.

Next, I read  news  for 15  minute and I was wearing my clothes to go to school .

After school I went to home for lunch, break and did homework.  

Then, I played with computer , learned english and listened to music. 

Finally, I had dinner with mom and I went to my bedroom for hearty sleep  


توی این جمله: I read  news  for 15  minute and I was wearing my clothes to go to school چند اشتباه وجود داره. اول اینکه برای خوندن اخبار از حرف تعریف مشخص the استفاده میشه پس باید مینوشتید:
I read the news دوم اینکه وقتی از 15 دقیقه صحبت میکنید باید minute رو جمع ببندید و بنویسید minutes و سوم اینکه شما دارید درباره کارهایی که دیروز پشت سرهم انجام دادید حرف میزنید چرا یهو وسط جمله, گذشته استمراری به کار بردید و نوشتید: and I was wearing my clothes to go to school؟ این کاربرد گذشته استمراری در اینجا کاملا اشتباهه. باید گذشته ساده به کار میبردید و مینوشتید: I wore/put on my clothes.
در خط بعدی بعد از عبارت After school یه کاما قرار بدید.
این جمله تون:  I went to home for lunch ترجمه از فارسیه. تو ویدیوها چند بار توضیح دادم که برای home از حرف اضافه to استفاده نمیشه مگر اینکه قبلش یه صفت ملکی یا صفت اشاره باشه. پس نباید اینجا از حرف اضافه to استفاده میکردید.
توی این جمله هم دو تا ایراد وجود داره: Then, I played with computer , learned english اول اینکه با استفاده از کامپیوترتون بازی کردید پس بگید: I played on my computer و دوم اینکه اسم زبان های مختلف اسم خاص هست. این رو هم توی ویدیوها گفتم پس باید با حرف capital نوشته بشه. باید مینوشتید: English با E بزرگ نه کوچیک. و توی این جمله: I went to my bedroom for hearty sleep حرف تعریف نامشخص رو جا انداختید باید مینوشتید  a hearty sleep. 


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آزاده مبشر
نقل قول شده از: حسین ضیائی

سلام و روزتون بخیر

جواب تمرین صفحه ۸۵ قسمت ۴ A BLOG POST

A HARD DAY

Yesterday I got up early to go work at 5:30.

First I brush my teeth. Next I dressed and ready to go.

after that I went to work by bus. I'm working in a fire station. Then my colleagues and I had breakfast together. In the afternoon we had a big fire in a big factory. We worked there for seven hours. It was very hard and dangerous.

finally I went to bed at 4 A.M.

It was a hard working day

 

 


سلام عزیزم,
جمله اول تون این بوده: Yesterday I got up early to go work at 5:30 که حرف اضافه work رو جا انداختید. باید می نوشتید: Yesterday I got up early to go to work at 5:30.

لطفا به زمان جمله هاتون دقت کنید. قاطی نوشتید. در مورد دیروز صحبت میکنید و باید گذشته ساده به کار ببرید. جمله بعدی تون این بوده: First I brush my teeth. Next I dressed and ready to go. اما باید می نوشتید: First, I brushed my teeth. Next, I dressed and was/got ready to go. به محل قرار گرفتن کاما هم دقت کنید لطفا.

جمله بعدی تون کاملا درسته اما این جمله: I'm working in a fire station زمانش رو حال استمراری نوشتید که به خودیه خود غلط نیست اما. یکی از کاربردهای حال استمراری اشاره به مسئله ای هست که موقتیه. یعنی وقتی مینویسیدI'm working in a fire station یعنی شغل من در ایتسگاه آتش نشانی موقتیه و فعلا اینجا مشغولم به زودی میخوام جای دیگه ای کار کنم. اگه منظورتون این بوده درسته اما اگه خیر و میخواستید بفرمایید که شغل شما این هست یعنی آتش نشان هستید, باید از حال ساده استفاده کنید. از حال ساده برای بیان fact ها مسائلی که در مورد زندگی مون واقعیت دارن, واقعیات زندگی مون استفاده می کنیم. و در این صورت باید مینوشتید: I work in a fire station.

جمله بعدی تون هم درسته کاملا. جمله بعدش هم همین طور آفرین. فقط بعد از in the faternoon و after that یه کاما هم بذارید. در کل ادامه اش رو کاملا درست نوشتید.yes
تمرینات رو انجام بدید سعی کنید در چت روم هم حضور داشته باشید تا مکالمه تون بهتر بشه عزیزمsmileyheart

 

 


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حسین ضیائی

سلام و روزتون بخیر

جواب تمرین صفحه ۸۵ قسمت ۴ A BLOG POST

A HARD DAY

Yesterday I got up early to go work at 5:30.

First I brush my teeth. Next I dressed and ready to go.

after that I went to work by bus. I'm working in a fire station. Then my colleagues and I had breakfast together. In the afternoon we had a big fire in a big factory. We worked there for seven hours. It was very hard and dangerous.

finally I went to bed at 4 A.M.

It was a hard working day


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سمانه رجبی (High Phoenix)

Hi dear Azadeh,

Writing, a blog post, page 85, starter book.

My life in a day!

Yesterday was a different day for me and my family. We had a big party. My brother’s wife and her family came to our house in Sirch- one of the villages around Kerman, for the first time.

First, I got up very early, at 5:00 in the morning. And then, I washed my face, and had breakfast. Next, I did a lot of housework like, washing the yard and the swimming pool, and when I was done, I filled it with water for swimming. After that, I took a shower and got dressed. I was very excited! After a few minutes, they arrived. So, my parents and I greeted them.

In the afternoon, we had a delicious meal. After lunch, I swam with my brother’s wife and her sister for a while. We had a lot of fun. At the same time, our parents walked to the river near our house. After that, We played soccer together, and when I had time, practiced English in the yard. I love the trees there. The weather was great.

In the evening, we had some fruit. We drank a tasty juice, too. It was awesome! Next, we had dinner. We also watched TV, talked, and laughed a lot. It was fun!

I finally went to bed, around 2:00 a.m., it was too late! I usually go to bed before 11:00 in the evening. I was really tired!


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نقل قول شده از: سمانه رجبی (High Phoenix)

Hi dear Azadeh,

Writing, a blog post, page 85, starter book.

My life in a day!

Yesterday was a different day for me and my family. We had a big party. My brother’s wife and her family came to our house in Sirch- one of the villages around Kerman, for the first time.

First, I got up very early, at 5:00 in the morning. And then, I washed my face, and had breakfast. Next, I did a lot of housework like, washing the yard and the swimming pool, and when I was done, I filled it with water for swimming. After that, I took a shower and got dressed. I was very excited! After a few minutes, they arrived. So, my parents and I greeted them.

In the afternoon, we had a delicious meal. After lunch, I swam with my brother’s wife and her sister for a while. We had a lot of fun. At the same time, our parents walked to the river near our house. After that, We played soccer together, and when I had time, practiced English in the yard. I love the trees there. The weather was great.

In the evening, we had some fruit. We drank a tasty juice, too. It was awesome! Next, we had dinner. We also watched TV, talked, and laughed a lot. It was fun!

I finally went to bed, around 2:00 a.m., it was too late! I usually go to bed before 11:00 in the evening. I was really tired!


Hi Samaneh,

Thank you for sending your homework dearsmileyyes
There is a word for your brother's wife and that is "sister in-law"
 

توی این جمله: Next, I did a lot of housework like, washing the yard نیازی نیست بعد از like هم کاما بذارید. اضافه است. توی این جمله: I finally went to bed, around 2:00 a.m. بعد از bed نیازی به کاما نیست.



Seems like you've had quite a day Samanehsmileyyes


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کمال ربیع زاده

با سلام. تمرین صفحه  85 از درس 10B. 

A blog post

Write a blog about your day?

A HOLIDAY

Yesterday was a holiday for me. It was one Friday, that l was at the home.

Frirst, l got up at 9:30. I usually get up at8:00, but l was tired.

Next, l maked breakfast for my wife and myself. We was alone because my son was his grandfather's home.

Then, we had caffe with cocoa.

After that, l took a shower and did personal work.

After a few hours, we decided to go to the ferdos garden for lunch with my family's wife.

After lunch, l and my son went to swimming pool.

After pool, we had pottage.

Finally, we went home. we had dinner and l went to bed early.   


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آزاده مبشر
نقل قول شده از: کمال ربیع زاده

با سلام. تمرین صفحه  85 از درس 10B. 

A blog post

Write a blog about your day?

A HOLIDAY

Yesterday was a holiday for me. It was one Friday, that l was at the home.

Frirst, l got up at 9:30. I usually get up at8:00, but l was tired.

Next, l maked breakfast for my wife and myself. We was alone because my son was his grandfather's home.

Then, we had caffe with cocoa.

After that, l took a shower and did personal work.

After a few hours, we decided to go to the ferdos garden for lunch with my family's wife.

After lunch, l and my son went to swimming pool.

After pool, we had pottage.

Finally, we went home. we had dinner and l went to bed early.   


سلام کمال جان و ممنون بابت ارسال تکالیفyes

یه نکته مهم اینه که پاراگراف نویسی رو رعایت کنید. شما هر جمله رو توی یه خط نوشتید که درست نیست. جملات مربوط به هم باید پشت سرهم توی یه پاراگراف نوشته بشن و وقتی موضوع عوض میشه, اگه عوض میشه یه پاراگراف جدید شروع بشه. این مسئله توی رایتینگ اهمیت خیلی زیادی داره

به بالا نگاه کنید از "به" که underline شده تا "داره" که اون هم underline شده یه پاراگراف به حساب میاد. پاراگراف ممکنه کوتاه و در حد یکی دو جمله یا طولانی تر باشه.

به این جمله تون دقت کنید: l was at the home حرف تعریف مشخص the در اینجا اضافه است و باید مینوشتید:  l was at home. توی این جمله تون: l maked breakfast فراموش کردید که گذشته ساده فعل make در واقع made میشه نه maked. 
و به این جمله هم دقت کنید:  We was alone because my son was his grandfather's home برای we از were به منظور اشاره به گذشته استفاده میشه و برای بودن در خونه کسی حرف اضافه at به کار میره. پس باید مینوشتید:
 We were alone because my son was at his grandfather's home

این عبارت: caffe with cocoa. رو متوجه نشدم که منظورتون چه نوشیدنی هست. ترکیب قهوه و کاکائو؟ کلمه قهوه coffee نوشته میشه عزیزم.
عبارت personal work اصلا رایج نیست و به جاش میتونید بگید:  I ran some errands.

به این جمله تون دقت کنید:  we decided to go to the ferdos garden for lunch with my family's wife عبارت the ferdos garden اگه اسم جایی باش اسم خاصه و اسم خاص ترجمه نمیشه پس بهتر بود مینوشتید Baghe Ferdows. و به این دقت کنید: my family's wife این یعنی "همسر خونوادم" در صورتی که شما میخواستید بگید "خونواده همسرم" که میشه: my wife's family.

به این جمله تون توجه کنید: l and my son went to swimming pool اول اینکه توی زبان انگلیسی دیگران مقدم بر خود شما هستن یعنی وقتی میخواید بگید "من و فلانی" اول اسم فلانی میاد بعد خودتون پس باید مینوشتید my son and I نه برعکس. و بخش went to swimming pool در واقع ترجمه از فارسیه. توی فارسی ما میگیم "رفتیم استخر" اما یه انگلیسی زبان میگه "رفتیم شنا". پس بهتر بود مینوشتید:

My son and I went swimming
در مورد After pool هم همین طور. بهتر بود مینوشتید after swimming. 


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مرضیه حاجی حیدری (High Phoenix)

Page:85

 A BLOG POST

A BUSY DAY

by Marzi 10 hours ago

yesterday was a busy day for me.

I got up early around 5:30.

First, I prepared breakfast for kids and I had some lemon juice, but I didn’t have breakfast.

Next, I went to the park to do yoga with the group.

Then, I came my home and took my son to kindergarten.

Next, I came my home and had some fruits, then I studied English and Watched Tv series.

After that, I cooked dinner for kids and checked the message and the kids can home. I prepared lunch for them, I went to the forum, I came home around 7:30, I spend time with my family.

Finally, I went to bed around 11:00.

ازاده جان می خواستم متن را چک کنم ولی متاسفانه متن پایین نمیاد و تکون نمی خوره .