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نقل قول شده از: مرضیه حاجی حیدری (High Phoenix)

AN INVESTIGATION 

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Writ an email to a friend and invite them to a party.

 

Hi Sori and Arezoo,


Hi Marzieh,
Thanks for sending the homeworksmileyyes
It's an invitation dear not investigation.
Write. Not writ
This sentence: "You can to come your kids" is wrong. You should write: "You can bring your kids"
"the our kids" is wrong. You cannot use "the" and "our" together. It's either "the kids" or "our kids"
When you're giving the address don't say: "then straight and turn left" say: "then go straight and turn left"
In this sentence: "can you some potato and soda" you need to add a verb: "can you bring some potato and soda"



مرضیه جان, میدونم زحمت کشیدید تکلیف رو انجام دادید اما ظاهرا با عجله نوشتید چون ایرادهایی داشتید که معمولا ندارید مثلا اینکه کلماتی که باید حرف اولشون رو Capital مینوشتید ننوشتید یا بعد از نقطه انتهای جمله فاصله نذاشتید. ضمنا این یه ایمیله و وقتی ایمیل یا کلا writing مینویسید, پاراگراف نویسی رو رعایت کنید. هر جمله در یه خط جدا نباشه بلکه پشت سرهم در قالب یک یا چند پاراگراف باشنsmileyheart


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مرضیه حاجی حیدری (High Phoenix)

AN INVESTIGATION 

Page:85

Writ an email to a friend and invite them to a party.

 

Hi Sori and Arezoo,

would you like to come to a lunch party at my garden?

It's on Sunday, next week. can you come at 10:30?

You can to come your kids. I prepared many hobbies for them.wink

I want to make hamburger and salad. I know, the our kids love hamburger. What do you think? Is that good?yes

You can take the bus number 5 to my garden. Get off the bus across from the first Avenue. then straight and turn left to the alley number 7. my garden is in alley number 7.

I hope you can come! oh, can you some potato and soda?

Bestheart

Marzi